Monday, 5 September 2011


Into the abyss
of my dark life..
you ignited a spark,
of warmth & love..
Filling my solitude,
with dreams infinite..
You came as an answer,
to my prayers..
Touched my soul,
with the grace of your love..
and gave a reason to smile..
Together wove dreams,
of colourful fantasies..
living each day,
to embrace in realism..
eyes twinkle & lips quiver,
as your thoughts conquer me.
Each day dawns with dreams,
& nights enveloped with memories..
Luring each other and..
awaiting to surrender ourselves,
in the lap of heavenly bliss.


  1. This sounds like a fresh love affair beckoning to blossom. I liked this a lot. Beautiful.

  2. Thanx a lot Tameka :) just had a glance at your blog, truly awesome:)

  3. your romantic thoughts have emerged as a beautiful poetry. when two loving souls meet, life gets the feedback of an wonderful aura and keeps you fresh and scented as jasmine.

    wonderful poetry:))

  4. Thanx a lot Sancheetha :)
    Loved ur comment, its very true :)

  5. I agree with Tameka. Oh the feeling of euphoria when you are in love. Beautiful Deepa.

  6. Thanx a lot Rimly :)
    As an amateur writer, i feel so overwhelmed at the response of great writers like you :)

  7. Hi, you have beautifully sprayed the heavenly aroma of love,making the heart of a reader tranquil with the feel of it.Probably every letter of yours bears the witness to the inexpressible,unflinching,unfathomable ocean of love waiting to gush out from your heart at the slightest inkling of your mind. EXCELLENT.

  8. Thanks a lot Samrat, that was indeed a wonderful comment.
    Such comments sure does boost my self confidence, thank you once again...

  9. That’s the thing with love…
    It gives a glimpse of bliss and keeps alluding…. Only the lucky few remain fortunate…
    So are you one? :P

  10. Thanx a lot for reviewing my write up.. :)